faq 2: screenplays
How did you start writing screenplays?
What's the difference between a screenplay and a novel?
Which do you prefer writing?
When your script is filmed, it can't match what you've imagined. Isn't that weird?
How close is The Hole (the film) to After the Hole (the novel)?
Do you write original scripts or just adapt your own novels?
the answers
How did you start writing screenplays?

It came about by chance. Soon after my first novel had been published, I was approached by a
young independent film director who said he wanted to film the story. Naturally, I was extremely
excited by this, especially since it was all happening very fast on the heels of the novel's
publication. He also wanted me to write the screenplay for the film, which was something I'd never
tried to do before, but which I jumped at.

I've always loved cinema (though by contrast I really don't have any strong feelings for the theare,
which I know probably makes me the worst English teacher ever in that respect) but the world of
screenplays was a new one to me. I knew nothing and there was no time to learn, so I just wrote
what I thought a screenplay should be.

Not surprisingly, I got it wrong. My attempt was way too long and far too detailed. (I'd really written a
novel with the dialogue set out differently.) It was difficult and frustrating because much of the time I
couldn't work out how differently to approach it in order to make it work. In the end, I had to drop the
project: this was all happening while I was at university, and Finals were looming. I had the choice of
continuing on the script or actually doing some revision. For better or worse, I chose to revise.

But again, rather as with my first novel-length story (the fantasy one which never got published), it
felt like there was something here that maybe I could do if I kept working at it. So over the next few
years, while holding down a teaching job, I wrote some more screenplay material, and read some
books on how to do it, and generally worked at getting better. It took a long time, again, but a couple
of years ago my first TV drama was aired. Rather like having a first book published, that has opened
the floodgates rather, and now screenplay work for cinema and television takes up a lot of my writing
time. (Top)

What's the difference between a screenplay and a novel?

More than I thought at first!

Because a screenplay is the first step in getting a film made, whereas a novel is a finished product in
its own right, they have to do very different jobs. A novel is communicating with an audience of
readers, but a screenplay is really only communicating with a handful of people: the people who will
make the film (which in turn will communicate with the audience). So in a screenplay, your job as a
writer is to ensure that the film-making team has all the information they need in order to generate
something like your vision of the story, while leaving them enough breathing space to include their
own creative input and influence. It's a balancing act between too much and not enough.

Screenplays are also, by their nature, collaborative. Once a novel is written, it gets scrutinised by
several people: my editor, some good friends who are also good critics, and so on. These people's
comments help polish the novel, but usually it's towards the end of the writing process that their
comments are most useful. Screenplays, on the other hand, generate huge numbers of meetings,
script notes, phone calls and deadlines. They are much more team-worky than you're used to as a
novelist (where you have the luxury of approaching things in your own way and in your own time).
With a novel, all your time is spent in front of the word-processor (or wherever) until it's finished,
whereas with a screenplay, half your time may be spent with other members of the team,
developing a shared vision of the project.

Finally, screenplays look and feel very different to novels. They're governed by different rules and
there is really no room for what you might call stylistic innovation - style isn't really an important factor
of screenplay writing because, if it's literary style we're talking about, it doesn't translate onto
screen. (Cinematic style is a different case, of course.) Screenplays have a set structure (three acts
of certain relative lengths and certain important constituent ingredients) that you ignore at your
peril. They are, in fact, a much more stylised medium than are novels, which invite far more
experimentation in form and content.

This isn't really a criticism, though. In fact, having the structure determined for you, as it were, can be
very liberating. It leaves you as writer free to concentrate solely on those factors within your control:
pace, setting, character, dialogue. You don't have to concentrate on the impact of your prose nearly
so much, which means you generally write faster.

The more I think about this, the more I realise the list of differences may be endless, so I'll leave it
there... (Top)

Which do you prefer writing?

Both formats have their attractions, and strangely, their weaknesses are also often their strengths.
For example, you might think that the collaborative aspect of screenplay writing is something that
would upset a novelist used to working in isolation. In fact, though, this is one of the great
attractions of screenplay work - for me, anyway. It is very stimulating to see your seed of an idea
approached by other creative minds, each with their own particular point of view, each bringing their
own strengths to it. That's the main advantage of screenplay writing, I think.

The main advantage of novel writing is the degree of control you have over the finished product.
Novels are a medium in which every phrase does count, where there are more factors to juggle and
interleave if the end result is to be effective. Novels take longer and are harder to write (again, for
me) but that's what I love about them: the challenge of pushing yourself to communicate your
feelings to someone you've never met, just through the words on the page. And to do it largely
alone.

For me, then - and I know this wouldn't hold true for a lot of writers of either novels or screenplays -
the two formats compliment each other very well. In my heart, I suspect I'm a novelist. It's what I'd be
doing if I was shipwrecked on a desert island. But given that I'm not, I love screenplay work as well.
It's challenging and exciting and fun in different ways to novel writing, and perhaps the greatest of
these ways is the sense in which, from conception all the way through to the local multiplex, it's a
shared experience rather than a solitary one. (Top)

When your script is filmed, it can't match what you've imagined. Isn't that weird?

This can be very true.

Everyone knows the shock (usually negative) of going to see a film of a book they love, and finding
that all the scenes and characters who have lived and breathed in their imaginations have been
replaced by impostors. Films never match the books on which they're based. (Brief sideline: I have
an exception to this, which is the film of John Steinbeck's Of Mice and Men, starring Gary Sinese
and John Malkovich. For some reason, this film matches almost perfectly what I had in my head from
reading the novel. At least one part of the reason for this has to be that Steinbeck's novel - or
novella - is extremely short, so that Sinese, as director, is able to keep nearly every scene from the
original. The dialogue, too, is as close to the book as possible. End of sideline.)

When I'm writing a screenplay, then, I steel myself for this right from the start. I try not to get as
closely attached to how things are going to look, how people are going to sound and act, as I would
do in a novel. And, I think inevitably, I fail, because if you're writing with any involvement or
committment at all, you can't help becoming attached to your work.

However, by reminding myself that it will change once it's out of my hands, I try to keep the
shock-damage to a minimum. In all fairness, The Visitor - which was my first TV script, and the first
screenplay of mine which I saw completed - was pretty much exactly the way I'd imagined it in my
head.

One advantage I have here, I suppose, is that although I imagine places very vividly, I don't tend to
imagine the faces of my characters all that specifically. (I'm generally bad with faces, actually.) So
seeing actors I haven't imagined playing the roles isn't that hard to deal with, because they're rarely
replacing a fully-realised face that I've grown attached to. (Top)

How close is The Hole (the film) to After the Hole (the novel)?

Filming After the Hole was always going to be tricky - I realised this myself when I was working on a
script for it all those years ago at university. There have to be compromises. (Why? Well, the ending
of the book is - it's generally agreed - unfilmable, and two thirds of the novel take place in pitch
darkness, which the cinema audience might just feel was a rip-off.)

So in adapting After the Hole, the only way to manage it is to try to stay true to the spirit of the
original, while deviating from that original in certain details. I think that's a fair compromise. Until I see
the finished film, I won't know exactly how the compromise has been achieved, but I have read the
shooting script and I think it's got it where it counts. In fact, some aspects of the film are even more
unsettling than the novel! (Top)

Do you write original scripts or just adapt your own novels?

Although I started out by adapting - or trying to adapt - my own stuff, I now write original screenplays.
It seems now that when I get an idea for a story, I know immediately whether it's a film idea or a book
idea: they just announce themselves in that way. And because, as I've said above, the two kinds of
writing compliment each other so well, it works well for me to split my writing time between them in
this way. (Top)